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Post by mizuki on Jan 16, 2007 21:40:45 GMT -5
XD Yeah, I made this poem some time back. I really love it. Hope you guys like it as well.
Suffocating
I am suffocating And I just need to breathe I'm smothered under pressure I must be relieved
Nothing I do is right, Nothing they say is fair I cry and scream and throw a fit. But no one seems to care.
Nobody will listem. To what I have to say My life is not important, Yet I'm living everyday.
I can't do what I want I cannot stay out late Here I sit and write this poem To release my pain and hate.
I'm confused and I'm alone I'm lost inside my mind. No one will search beyond my looks To see what they might find.
So many thoughts confuse me, Feelings I can't perceive, In time of adolescence And I just need to leave
None of it makes sense None of it seems real. And no one understands The emotions that I feel.
I'm still suffocating And I still need to breathe. I'm smothered under feelings Let me be relieved.
YAY all done
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Post by Rei on Jan 16, 2007 21:48:17 GMT -5
<33333333 LOVEEEEEEE!!!!
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Post by mizuki on Jan 17, 2007 0:44:44 GMT -5
Thanks Shiku-sama. XD
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Post by Kaoru on Jan 17, 2007 18:41:00 GMT -5
Cool!!!! :3
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Post by mizuki on Jan 18, 2007 0:17:53 GMT -5
Teal thank you. I have a question: Is everyone on this board family or something? Because you all g by the surname of "Usachi"
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Post by Rei on Jan 18, 2007 7:53:12 GMT -5
XD Actually there's only 6 of us that are Usachis XD Me, Shiz-Chan, Suka, Kazumi, Suki and Ken
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Post by Takeshi Usachi on Jan 18, 2007 13:16:07 GMT -5
Yep, and I'm the odd man out, 'cause my surname is Usaki
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Post by Ken on Jan 18, 2007 16:56:29 GMT -5
And I'm the kid that wonders why the hell he's still alive and here.
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Post by Rei on Jan 18, 2007 17:24:30 GMT -5
That's my line Kiri! I'm the "supposedly" emo and goth kid, but I'm not... DX Supposedly I act like it.
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Post by Ken on Jan 18, 2007 17:50:07 GMT -5
You act preppy
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Post by Rei on Jan 18, 2007 19:12:35 GMT -5
XD Not IRL supposedly, everyone is OVERWHELMED by my "gothness" XD It's either they don't have a brain or their standard of goth is much lower than mine... XD
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Post by mizuki on Jan 19, 2007 1:16:10 GMT -5
Oh, I see now. I'm a rocker but I'm probably more of a "punk" rocker than everything. I like Goth, especially the Gothic Lolita Clothes, but my mom doesn't allow me to buy them DX she says they're part of the devil or something.
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Post by Rei on Jan 19, 2007 18:27:55 GMT -5
DX I'm not goth or emo enough to be goth and emo, but I'm not preppy enough to be a prep DX I'm not punked out enough to be a punk XD The only thing I am is, Anime freak enough to be an Anime freak XD
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Post by mizuki on Jan 21, 2007 3:02:39 GMT -5
Same here. I love Anime. XD
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