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Post by Rei on Jan 1, 2007 10:02:10 GMT -5
Next poem >DDD
Lift me Up out of my sadness Out of my tears Smile for me Like I've always done for you And when I need it Let me lean on you Like I've always let you do When I Die Cry... Cry for me Like how I will continue to do After I die
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Post by Jet KamaKura on Jan 1, 2007 10:05:24 GMT -5
you know if you do a poem too then whos going to grade it for the contest?
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Post by Rei on Jan 1, 2007 10:07:43 GMT -5
We'll have a vote, like every other contest XD
*founds Poetry NB* >DDD Wow... I have 3 poems in here named Memories - -
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Post by kyoshiro on Jan 1, 2007 10:12:12 GMT -5
Isnt one poem enough? I mean, if everyone where to come up with three or four then it would kinda be like cheating or unfairness or something would`nt it? just a guess ^^;
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Post by Rei on Jan 1, 2007 10:48:50 GMT -5
Isnt one poem enough? I mean, if everyone where to come up with three or four then it would kinda be like cheating or unfairness or something would`nt it? just a guess ^^; Note: Read my explainatory post ( aka the first 2 posts in this thread)
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Post by lloyd on Jan 1, 2007 14:46:30 GMT -5
Here's one I just made
Save me from the darkness that lies within me An eternal fate locked inside me A seperate soul Master of my destiny Only you can set me free from the destiny I've been given Only in death will I be free But I'd sacrifice my life... To save yours...
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Post by Cloud Strife on Jan 1, 2007 20:12:12 GMT -5
XD; I think I'm only going to enter that one poem. I love all of yours >0<
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Post by Misuzu Usachi on Jan 1, 2007 20:34:11 GMT -5
._. Ihad a poem cvalled memories too... T_T AHHHH!!!!!!!!! *Runs*
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Post by Misuzu Usachi on Jan 1, 2007 21:04:08 GMT -5
They wont lemme modify my post. T_T
ill just write it here.
(I wanna enter too!!! T_T Bout the only thing i CAN enter. It's called "m e m o R i e s" :3)
Hold on to the things The memories Of you long ago when you were Unchanged The f a d i n g past As you continue to walk through the loneliness The pain grips on to you But Letting go of those m e m o R i e s Will only deepen the Pain
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Post by Rei on Jan 2, 2007 11:22:19 GMT -5
Gone...
It is gone... The flower petals have fallen... This was never supposed to happen... Where am I now? I know there will never be a time... When it will come back again I can only foolishly believe... For it is all I have left... But everything is gone... Including my fading shadow... ___________________________________________________
What do flower petals have to do with anything? No clue i just put it in cause I thought it fit...
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Post by Cloud Strife on Jan 2, 2007 18:19:13 GMT -5
Well, if you think abou it when flower petals fall off a flower and they blow away in the wind they are gone almost never to be seen again. So it does fit in.
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Post by Rei on Jan 3, 2007 20:45:21 GMT -5
YES! THAT MAKES SENSE! *gives Kyou Karma*
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Post by Cloud Strife on Jan 4, 2007 17:55:03 GMT -5
WOO! ;D *dance*
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Post by Rei on Jan 5, 2007 11:37:58 GMT -5
Okay? Is everyone's poem's in? We begin our voteee~
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Post by SyphonVectorman on Jan 5, 2007 12:55:28 GMT -5
I wrote this for a "lost love" sort of speak and I had her for Secret Santa in class. XD That Special OneI know what I have told you I know that it's confirmed I know that we can't be together Though my feelings still burn. Throughout the years I will live Times I will always think of you Though I may not show it physically; Deep inside, I still care. Even if you're mad at me, Even if you move, Even if I'm in a relationship, You'll still be that special one. So during this vacation, my greetings advance; Have a Merry Merry Christmas and a Happy Birthday too. If you want to see the original poem in its picture, you can see it here. Hehe... It's kinda embarassing to say the least, but this is my entry. ^^;
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